Love it man! Solid advice - you asked me for feedback. So I’m gonna say what I think because I think you have everything you need.

Right now, you’re like 60 -40 professionalism vs voice. Just flip it, be 60 percent voice, 40 percent professional.

Meaning, share your real takes like you are, but maybe add another sentence or two here or there where it makes sense to talk more about your emotional reaction to the steps.

Can be something like,

“You want to make money as a writer but you don’t know where to start.

A feeling I had most mornings…”

Your writing is good I can see your authentic voice, I would just lean into it more if that makes sense!

If you have any questions, let me know.

Also - here is something I wrote on my personal blog which might help:

https://tonysbologna.com/2024/12/27/the-writing-skill-no-one-talks-about-but-everyone-needs/